Blog Posts - Comment 2

This comment is based on Jonathan Ng’s blog post entitled “Maycomb Tribune – Tom Robinson’s failed escape attempt”.

I feel that it is written pretty well but there is definitely room for improvement. One such point would be that you should add in photos to describe what happened or not the picture of the late Tom Robinson. Besides, you should have described the tones of the two men, Atticus and Mr. Ewell when interviewed. I would also like to suggest another new headline for this article, like “Negro shot dead in attempted escape”. It would be much more specific and shorter. Lastly, there could be more specific evidence such as the time of the incident, instead of just stating yesterday, you could say yesterday morning.