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1I323 – Tay Wee Shing Kervin

I am referring to 1I312 – Wei Kiat’s posting. Firstly, I feel that he has answered the questions very well. However, I feel that he could have elaborated more on some questions. I am actually wondering why are there brackets in the poems. In my own point of view, I think it looks like a song to me. Elaboration can be used in him expressing about “No fate” and also “No world” as a symbol of romance or love. He has also done well in managing to cover the whole poem over the two questions. Lastly, I disagree with him on “Whatever a sun will always sing is you”, he says it describes the feelings of the poet. In my point of view, I think is more of describing the scene you are actually in.