Comments on Liak Ghee's Setting Descriptions

Just would like to comment on a few pointers of improvement:

1.) "Few Deck Chairs", I feel can be changed into a type of language, for example "brown chairs seemed to camaflouged in the sand".
2.) There is no need for "but other than that there was nothing much." First, it is informal and it is unnecessary to mention.
3.) I feel that "azure blue and magnolia white clouds" are commonly used phrases, do change it.
4.) I like the last sentence "dancing in the wind", good use of metaphors.