This comment is based on Clarence’s blog post entitled “Russian Ship Capsize”.
Good job in telling all about the current affairs in today’s world. I do definitely agree with you that money should not be saved at the expense of the lives of the people. From this and based on your character, you are one that likes to create or construct new stuff, especially since you are in CCA Robotics. However, maybe you could have added more information about how ships are built such that we could have gained in-depth knowledge about why the ship capsized, which will mean looking at the heavier side of events, in this case being the scientific part. Besides, maybe you could share your experience on a ship if you have sat one before in order to enhance a real visual imagery for your readers.
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