Monday, July 18, 2011

Term 3 Comment 9

This comment is based on Tian-Le’s blog post entitled “Adolescent Delinquency.”

A meaningful and well-chosen topic for your blog post since some of us could be stuck in this situation currently now. To start, you have given your audience a great in-depth report, which is inclusive of research done on the Internet as well as voicing your own opinions with regards to this highly debatable issue. It is also a very informal way to approach the audience, which could trigger response from the public, especially parents and parents-to-be, whom may want to change their views with regards to this by changing their lifestyle to spend more valuable time with their children. On a brighter side, let’s wish and hope that none of us will ever be caught in this situation and for those that have been caught in it, it is time for you to take action because you are the only one that can help yourself and bring about change for the better.

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