This comment is based on Wei Yang’s blog post entitled “The Upcoming Project’s Day Semi-Finals.”.
I personally feel that this topic could be inappropriate for a blog post that will be read by students and teachers from Hwa Chong. For everything you write in your blog, you should have a purpose and based on the content, your purpose is to let the audience know more about Hwa Chong’s Projects Day Competition, but the audience are people that are aware of it already and at the end of the day, you have failed in your motive to telling others more. Although I believe that this blog post could serve as valuable knowledge to others (students/teachers not from Hwa Chong), you should have added on by giving your opinions on why is there such an event organised or what are the purposes/aims/objectives of holding this competition.
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